[HARD REJECT] One page template design

We just got hard rejected and was really curious what you guys think about it and maybe some tips on how to improve it?

Thanks all.

That’s going to be a tough sell for PSD as there is not a whole lot to it (might be worth creating a multi page version too).

It’s not bad but:

  • You could do more with the bullet navigation and type there

  • inconsistent margins and padding especially top/bottom of sections

  • band member info and footer both have typographic issues with sizing, line height

  • whole footer is very crowded

Thanks Charlie for the feedback.