[HARD REJECT] One page template design


#1

We just got hard rejected and was really curious what you guys think about it and maybe some tips on how to improve it?

Thanks all.


#2

That’s going to be a tough sell for PSD as there is not a whole lot to it (might be worth creating a multi page version too).

It’s not bad but:

  • You could do more with the bullet navigation and type there

  • inconsistent margins and padding especially top/bottom of sections

  • band member info and footer both have typographic issues with sizing, line height

  • whole footer is very crowded


#3

Thanks Charlie for the feedback.