Hard reject. Need your opinion

Hi. This item was rejected/ I never made music before for audiojungle(and at all) i really need feedback. Anything that i can change. Please share your thought with me. Is it bad at all?

Hey :raised_hand_with_fingers_splayed:t3:

I think that the arrangement is a little bit poor and not so interesting matching nowdays standarts.

Try to listen top tracks here on AJ, especially in your favorite styles. Try to achieve that quality and sound. Your music must meet the profession standarts and have commercial value for video projects. Also I can recommend to learn on YouTube tutorials, courses more and keep going to write music. Write the music you would buy for yourself.
The quality of tracks on AJ is improving day by day so you have to match this and permanently work hard and learn I believe.
I wish you will get it!

Cheers :call_me_hand:t3:

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Thank you for your reply!
What about instruments? Is it enough to use only 2 instruments in one track?

Any other comments? :slightly_frowning_face:

only 2 instruments and both sounds not good…
I think you should improve your music-writing skills, just watch some videos “how to” or tuts on youtube or on Envato Market. (https://music.tutsplus.com/tutorials?_ga=2.2274864.163128922.1506145097-1575485610.1495372245)
And write music more and more :wink:

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Thank you for reply! Looks like my path to success will be very long

And little tip from me: sax should be brighter (use eq) and with less reverb. Piano can be little brighter and also with less reverb.

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Thank you! :slightly_smiling_face:

Try to take only 4 chords and make a main melody easier. I Think it’s a little bit complicated your melody for stock music. Best regards!

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Thank you! I will try :slight_smile: