Hard reject, need some advice, please!


#1

Hi, guys! Really need your help or even good advice what’s wrong with my tracks! Herebelow is one of six rejected tracks. Would appreciate any opinion! Thanx in advance!
Russian Upbeat


#2

I like what you have going for you here. Just a few thoughts:

  1. The melody is a little repetitive and basic. It gets tiring after awhile.
  2. The horns sound fake. I would replace them with woodwind, strings, or a light synth.
  3. Because the song is so repetitive, it could stand to be shortened. 3:00 or less would probably be fine.
  4. I like what you are doing with the percussion section.
  5. The sound you used for the melody is a little hard to handle after awhile. I would use a different synth with less ‘punch’ to it.

Just my opinions. Take them or leave them. :blush: