Hard reject - need advice... Please !

OnBothSides · March 14, 2016, 1:52pm

Hi,

Here is another hard reject ! I really need your advices for this two projects. I’m puzzled. Thanks.

erikaivo · March 15, 2016, 12:12am

I like it, is very good video

Cuckoorico · March 15, 2016, 1:44am

I think it is good… its just that your particles are off… either eliminate them … or just add light flares (lens whacking)
Unfortunate that the reviewers couldn’t have at least told you that.

OnBothSides · March 15, 2016, 7:00am

Thanks moveNshake for your reply. It’s the first time i work with particles. I’m sorry to bother you but can you precise what make the particle “off” ? Best regards from France.

Plicha · March 15, 2016, 12:05pm

moveNshake means that particles should blend with the footage much nicely. Now, they look like they are off the footage.
I have a similar feeling, those particles disturb me. Either take the out or try to blend them somehow.

OnBothSides · March 16, 2016, 2:44am

Thanks guy. I will try to improve the way i blend. I feel sorry that i haven’t got any second chance with a soft reject.