Hard Reject - I need your help?



Please help me figure this out.

This morning my 1st two submissions were rejected. Obviously my songs missed the mark but I am not sure exactly why. Here they are on SoundCloud.

I am not ready to give up just yet. But I do need some advice on where I should focus my efforts. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated.

Thanks in advance,



You have to spice up the arrangement, play live and with a sustain pedal. Good luck!


Very “midi” unhuman sound, pour arrangment. I agree with atlemusic music - try to play live with dynamic sustain pedal and create relevant arrangment. Good luck!)

P.s. Second track intro reminded me Crematory - “tears of time”:slight_smile:


Thanks for the feedback. Wow. That Crematory song is uncanny! I have never listened to that band or song before and I cannot believe how close it is :slight_smile:




You are welcome :slight_smile: