Hard reject! Help, please

Guys, help, please, with reason of reject. This item got hard-reject.

I will be very grateful for any criticism and comments and hope to acceptance after rework with your help.
Thanks.

I think this is a very melancholy tune. Try writing something more fun. We need a more positive mood. And you need to beat with the middle in the equalization of the track. Such tracks are simply not well sold.