Hard Reject for Corporate Music

Hello fella, would you please kindly give me some feedback and guidance on this track, and how can I do better? I do not understand why it was hard reject right from the start.
Thanks a lot, much appreciated.

Hello. Honestly, I’m not sure that it’s like a Corporate track. It seemed to me that in music there is a cacophony, as if the notes are not always well suited to each other. In general, the track sounds monotonous, there is no pronounced melody, the development of the composition.

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Hello Lemonello, thank you for your feedback. Would you please kindly provide me some guidance?

The whole forum is not enough to tell about creating music) Listen to what you like, listen to what is popular, notice the details, don’t set the goal to copy, create your own.