Why mygame sound hard jecect?
Two things, I think the cymbal pitch is very high and a lot of treble going on there - try to shoot with something with more body to it. Also an additional percussive element, like a tom-tom, to give it some punch will help, maybe an underlying rhythm to add interest.
Several things: First, I think it is a bit simple, musically speaking. There should be more variation, at least another note. Second, you need to improve on your samples and overall mixing. The sound quality in this one has a lot of room to improve. Cheers!