Guys need your help with the dismantling the music

need your opinion> in the second part of this music, at 1:05 used parallel minor chords whether it affects the mood of a video will not spoil it? or leave it all on a major.
and overall your recommendations?
apologize for my English and defective track, he was not mixed


this transition is not as intimidating as the total mixing of the mix. I would recommend to work in this direction.

Thanks for the reply and recomend Brother! I’m scarecrow in arrangements. one of my tracks hard rejected, revewers says that the problem in the arrangement. I think they did not like the melody

At first I, too, was often refused. Now all is well. The main thing to work and work. And don’t rush)