Got Rejected and Want Your Help

Hey Guys
Just started to share music here,and unfortunately the first one was rejected.:cry:
Very eager to know where the problem is ? Your opinion is very important to me!:wink:


Its a very good composition!

I think the percussion is the problem, it have to much “smiley-eq” and it sounds the 90’s.

Check this guy out for inspiration he have good mixes.

Thank U for your great advise !!!
It’s right to the point and I think I realise where the problem is now after listening Sky-Production’s Songs you recommended.
I’m going to make it right and Hopefully will get pass next time !!!

Thank U So Much :clinking_glasses: