Here is the work which rejected!
Do you can give me few advices of course if you have a time ?
very nice , and very talented ,but a bit of porridge with tools 
but I like it!
Hhhhahahahah 
Nice to hear than man. But if talk seriously…
The vioilin starting at 0:18 sounds kind of midi-ish. The synth (?) starting at the same time (some kind of tremolo or delay synth?) sound out of context with the medeival mood for me.
The drums could be more round sounding with more bass and maybe more reverb.
The idea, composition and arrangement is cool!