Got a new reject! Need Help Again! :)

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#1

Aaand new item ews rejected. What you think ? Whats bad in this work?

https://yadi.sk/d/RLhhi1t03ECC9e


#2

put it on soundcloud for better listening and add link here


#3

Buy a pro account on soundcloud for me because my account playspace is ended and ill put this track there. :))))


#4

see , you just sound a little bad , but the idea is super !!!