got 2 logo hard rejected, need some advice and feedback pls

they rejected my 2 logos this week :frowning:
ur advice and feedback why i got rejected will help me for future work, thank you

here’s what they said:
Thank you for your submission. We have completed our review of “Elephant Wink logo Design” and unfortunately we found it isn’t at the quality standard required to move forward, and you won’t be able to re-submit this item again.

ElephantWink-logo-preview

hi buddy
indeed u have several issues with your logo , the first one is clearly the typo, the proportion between text and illustration is definitely not the right one … and teh typo is way too flat , too

otherwise, sorry to say just this but the black and white version is clearly not working indeed, when u turn the logo in this color combination , this is really too flat and “naive”

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okay thank you for the feedback…:wink:

u are welcome i hope it could help u :slight_smile: