Glitch Technology track rejected, give me feedback please!

I’ve got a rejection on my technology track. Any ideas what’s wrong and how should I improve it?

I think it’s that «static noise» sounding pad, and bass is too low and sometimes seems to be out of tune.

I think the track is overcomplicated in arrangement and there are too many changes and noises abruptly coming in and out. There are cool sounds and melodies around the track but the overall way of building the track makes difficult to the listener to get a whole one solid idea and then it is difficult to be as a background music for a visual work.