Tell me your opinion on what to change or fix
hi u have a major issue of typo , which is too flat and not combining fonts enough , as well
the idea of the s is nice though i tend to believe that this is not punchy enough as such
teh tagline is too compact u shoyld increase the interspace between letters in my view, it will naturally and mechanically bring a better proportion between the title and tagline
i think that the yellow color is not much of a good choice either in terms of aesthetics and contrast