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The experimental idea - poorly implemented.
Hey, I would first start on your mix, the kick drum is a bit loud. The music is good but the sounds you have used are very cheap. There are lots of great Native Instrument Kontakt libraries out there that will provide a similar sound but a lot more professional and organic. For example Session String Pro. I hope this helps!