hi indeed i like the originality that u put into it and tend to believe that u have a cool base to work with , which is a good thing to say the least. Now the thing is that u can definitely do even mich better with it again.
first of all, if u ask me , u have a really major hierarchy issue indeed. this is quite confusing what u have here at this stage … there is material to wander what is the central information … is this"live music, which is way more central and contrasting much much more with teh background? or is it “st patrick”. what i try to explain by this is that is my view u inverted the whole thing …saint patrick should be on the bottle, way bigger by the way and “live music” is a sideway info, so basically u can do whatever u like but not place it here lol
in addition, the footer is sort of "thick"and the spacing between lines look uneven … if i were u i would reduce the number of text lines, “admission and so on …” if people need it they will introduce it once they have bought … besides, u may also opt for changing the place where dj are displayed or keep it like this but maybe introducing a rectangle behind would help to cut what i use to call the totem effect … (if u have too many things piled like this , this is not looking good in the end …)
the italic text on top of the flyer , this is either not aesthetic , nor readable …
u should drop some shadows on the ground and under frames so that the composition looks more realistic and that “people can buy it more”