Flyer reject

graphics

#1

Hi

The download file contains: 2 Flyer one upright, the other across.

Flyer size: 10,7×15 cm. (4.21×5.90 inch)

Bleeds: 0,1 cm at each border

Fonts used: Century Gothic, (download link: https://www.wfonts.com/font/century-gothic)

Print Ready: CMYK, 300 DPI .PSD Layered, very easy to modify. well-assorted in folders.

Text Editable

But reject

Help ME


#2

hi for me this is kind of cute and i do not dislike what u have done, though i tend to believe that maybe your job has been rejected since there are a combination of small things that could be better and when u put two on two together , maybe they feel like this is not reaching the quality standard yet … for me the first thing that can be “reproached” is that the global thing looks a bit “retro style” and i am not sure that this is super marketable for envato …
in addition , there a bit of a coherence issue u have pine tree branches with shadows and balls coming out of them are not having , which definitely tends to make the design go flatter in a way …
for me the idea of having snowflakes on the face of the woman is pretty much of a wrong idea, this is a bit spoiling the high level character that u have drawn …
for “exciting christmas celebration” u should rather choose to place a banner under rather than playing with edges, as this is not looking smooth and aesthetic in this case

i guess i would be welcome to have a bit relief on christmas balls, that would not hurt , though i can understand that may have opted for making a “flat style”, but if, so, in my view u shoul take out shadows from other elements …

finally, as for i know, your typo is a bit flat for here and they are probably expecting you to play more with texts to bring more creativity and more work to the item


#3

Did you have the rights to sell the Santa Girl illustration?

http://wallpaperswide.com/christmas_santa_girl-wallpapers.html


#4

maybe this is his … who knows …


#5

no it’s not mine
i thought i could use


#6

how do they look
i haven’t sent them yet
should I send them?


#7

You cannot use images from google unless the image is tagged with permission for re-use with changes.
Beside this I don’t think they will approve your flyers because you have many design issues


#8

this may account for the huge discrepancy between the high quality of the central santa illustration and the rest …


#9

u have very big typo issues, alignment at tis stage is far from satisfying anf the spacing is very irregular, in other words , u are violating many bsic design principles. The composition of the last item is cool, u should focus on it, rework the typo to make it coherent and harmonious, while respecting information hierarchy and this one could make it …
the second one, the footer, is really way too flat indeed and the font for teh header is not good in my view , i think that the additional flares u put are not necessary …
the first one, the central image (santas illustration) and the associated texts are good, but the footer is way too much of a block, font combinations are not satisfying to say the least, u need to bring harmony this way


#10

I appreciate your help


#11

u are welcome :slight_smile:


#12

I installed this 4 mockup but they refused

3000x2000
fully hand drawn

I can send psd if you want

please help me
where am i making a mistake

If I send you to a psd you correct her maintenance mistakes

hat’s how I’m designed from now on.
please
help

I’ve sent them today

I do not know will be approved


#13

for this one this is the very same answer as for the one i answered last time, besidesm this is basically the same , u just changed the preview item inside the mock up and u just added the bifold … , besides for teh bifold, in my view, u need to rework slightly shadows for the thing to look more completely realistic indeed