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for me this is really cute and rather original , harmonious too, there is originality in the lay out as well but the thing is that your type really is super flat and some of your titles re really not outstanding enough, kep in mind that here u need a strong typo part and that u are expected to combine fonts in a general way
otherwise i also cannot identify why only why one circle as no edge when all the other two have

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thanks for your expert opinion. i will try to my best

how to improve my typography skill ? can u give me any suggestion or link ?

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i think observing other authors items are a good way to learn, too