Here it is, could use some feedback…
https://clyp.it/n4hocglv
Biggest issue is the main melody line is very repetitive. It’s ok to start with but then needs to develop with a different chord sequence and some variation to the tune. Shortening the track overall might help too.
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Totally agree with @PaulGraves
Btw nice track overall. Dunno, seems like nothing else is wrong. Lucks 
@FireLast & @PaulGraves
Thanks for your help :]