First track, rejected.. any feedback?

Here it is, could use some feedback…

Biggest issue is the main melody line is very repetitive. It’s ok to start with but then needs to develop with a different chord sequence and some variation to the tune. Shortening the track overall might help too.

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Totally agree with @PaulGraves
Btw nice track overall. Dunno, seems like nothing else is wrong. Lucks :wink:

@FireLast & @PaulGraves
Thanks for your help :]