First time trying out a new style. Honest feedback wanted!

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#1

Title says it all. I really have no idea what I’m doing haha but I think it might be worth a submit? Feel free to tear it apart.


#2

not completed. Sounds cheap.


#3

any idea why?


#4

They are not drowned in the mix. they sound too separate. mix, mix, MIX!