Thanks for the feedback.
Hi !
The reason for the rejection are two things - low sound quality of the track and the arrangement (composition of the track). According to the composition: the development of the theme is too long, the main expressive part of the composition is at the very end. In this video SONIC-MOTIF_Composition, I allowed myself to arrange the parts of your track a little differently. Sound quality: too wide stereo and frequency balance. In this video SONIC-MOTIF_EDIT I tried to fix it. But, it is more correct to do such actions at the mixing stage with a separate track of a musical instrument. Unfortunately, I don’t speak English and I can’t comment on my actions in these videos.
Good luck!
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Thank you so much for taking the time to provide detailed feedback, the video demonstration is more than enough. Thank you very much.