First Attempt rejected need feedback

Hi all i would like to get your feedback, I have just uploaded my first attempt on video hive its a logo sting that was rejected see text below.

We have completed our review of “Funky logo text sting for various uses, with alpha channell.” and unfortunately we found it isn’t at the quality standard required to move forward, and you won’t be able to re-submit this item again.

heres link to preview don’t hold back thanks.