I don’t think there’s a problem with the mix. Maybe the lead synth arriving at 1:28 is a bit too piercing and dry, stands out more than it should but that’s the smaller thing.
The main problem I think is with the arrangement.
Try a shorter breakdown. There’s too much time flashing around while nothing really happens.
And the other thing I’ve noticed is that the track has no climax at all. After 1:10 (where the peak of the song should start to rage with energy), we are not getting anywhere at all, seems like the flow is stuck. You need to get to the dramatic peak faster and with a lot of energy right after the breakdown. 15 seconds is fairly enough for the breakdown. Manage to get the action from 0:55 to 1:26 to be done in 0:55 to 1:10, and then blow it up, set it to fire with gasoline! You’ll have to leave some elements out of course, but you can work it out.
Good Luck, Cheers!