Feedback on track please

Hi people - newbie here. Any help or suggestions from the community would be greatly appreciated.


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intro, bad choice of instruments, that saw like pad is not suiting the guitars etc. use something softer

you need to create some better stereo width

1:10 that instrument again is bad, outdated and loud, needs something minimal and soft

some claps that are sparse are too loud

mix needs better balance overall to be less dynamic, meaning not having some very loud and some quiter instruments

also the end is too adrupt, replace or remove that saw pad, make a bit more commercial arrangement of parts, good luck