Can someone help me figuring out what I could improve in this track, and why it could have been rejected?
(main track + instrumental version)
I made it in a similar format to this other track of mine, which got approved, so it should be around the same quality level:
Comparing them, one aspect in which this one that got rejected may be inferior is the vocal chops. And also how they’re more sparse, leaving more empty space compared to the approved track.
But I’m not sure myself, and there could be other stuff that I’ve overlooked, so I’d like to know what you think.
I only left the other track for comparision since they’re the same style, and that one good accepted.
Thank you all.