Feedback on Rejected Item


#1

Hello teammates,

Can you please provide some feedback as to why this item was rejected?

https://soundcloud.com/forestdesert/wedding-vows-by-forestdesert-preview

Much appreciated!


#2

Any feedback is appreciated! :slight_smile:


#3

You put this in the wrong category, maybe you can edit and change it. Should be in Authors, not Customers.


#4

Thanks @ToivoMedia I didn’t realize that


#5

This one was Hard Rejected! Any suggestions how how it could be improved and accepted upon resubmission?


#6

There’s definitely some nice ideas in there.

The way that it is at the moment comes across (to me at least) as a little short and busy. Like an idea for something bigger, rather than a completed product.

My suggestion would be to build on the idea and make it a bit longer and have a bit more light and shade rather than throwing it all in at once in a 30 second piece. It will have more uses for more things if it’s longer, starts off lighter and has a build etc.


#7

@CrossGateProductions I actually considered making this a full piece and will work on creating more of a build up. Thanks for your feedback! :slightly_smiling_face:


#8

Seems like there have been quite a few views/listens to the track. I would appreciate any additional feedback or suggestions on how to to turn this Rejected item into a seller. :slightly_smiling_face:
Thanks in advance!


#9

i agree with @CrossGateProductions - there isn’t really much of an arrangement here, lots of neat little ideas but they just run right into one another without giving the listener any time to figure out what’s happening.


#10

Thanks @orbiterred Working on that now :slight_smile: