Feedback on rejected Design

Hello Everyone,

This is my rejected item. It would be really helpful, if anyone can feedback on my design, why it was rejected, what was missing and how it can improved ?

Thank you

The main title is unreadable. When you partially cover it with the model make sure people can read it.
There are tones of similar flyers. The market is over saturated with this type of designs.
Also you need to work on hierarchy. The first important is the title. Second in the artist / DJ. Third is the date and followerd by the rest of information.

Thank you for your feedback DesignSomething. I will keep them while creating my next design. May I know, How to create design which are new ?

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You can do it better. Maybe next time you will have success.