Hello,
I am looking for feedback on these two introductions. What could I do to increase my chances of getting accepted. Both of these are logo/title reveals.
Intro 1: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cPmz-fgx8zc&feature=youtu.be
Intro 2: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hFfp78-h-3Y&feature=youtu.be
Thank you!