Feedback needed

https://1drv.ms/v/s!AqBfScgQ-BVjhjPH7aOVWOE37y63?e=cimuj2

Hi guys I got hard rejected, I need some feedback from you, what can I do better? I really want to improve.

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The main reason is that there is absolutely nothing unique about your project. I mean that there are thousands of similar projects on the market. This style is somewhat outdated. Also your project has a lot of typography and alignment issues

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Thank you for your valuable Feedback.