Feedback needed on track please?

Envato Authors AudioJungle
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Hi,

I have finished a new track but need some feedback please. I want to get this right after a recent hard reject.

I am not sure if the drum track fits, I have tried a couple of other ideas but to no avail.
Maybe something completely different?
Any other advice would help please.

https://soundcloud.com/mechanism-music/new-day-testpreview

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Hi here !)
1 introduction mixed with the main theme (that is very not clear)
2 Yes , the drums are too Intrusive , and not mixed !)
3 no, culminating moment , ā€˜Monotonousā€™ )
Cheers !)

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I think it is too repetitive, you need to work on arrangement more and mix is not well. Also you should try other drum library. This is only my opinion.

Regards

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Ok, thanks for the feedbackā€¦ back to work I think.

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Hey MM!

In addition to what the otherā€™s have said, you definitely need either a better string library or to take them out. They sound way to fake as it is.

Good luck!

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Iā€™m using the ones that come with Logic Pro X (EXS Sampler).

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Hi :slight_smile:
Good work but I think that the drum part is too softā€¦ Or too quiet. But itā€™s just my homble opinion :slight_smile:

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All opinions welcome. Yep, the drums are the first place to start. If fact Iā€™m re-writing most of it after leaving it for a few days and returning for another listen.
Itā€™s always worth letting a track rest and resist uploading straight away as over enthusiasm for getting a track reviewed isnā€™t always a good thing.

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Hi, I think everything is fine, but the drums should be allocated brighter and more ā€¦ when they enter this place as the allocate, the impression that they are ā€œa mouseā€ quietly appeared ā€¦

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Iā€™ve just got around to producing a second mix, if anyone would like to compareā€¦ :slight_smile:

better or worse?

https://soundcloud.com/mechanism-music