Feedback needed in my try to go beyond.. Am I ready???

Envato Authors AudioJungle
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After years of working on classical, orchestral and piano compositions, I decided to go beyond of this, and I started to work in new more rhythmic and dynamic tracks… I’m aware I need lots of feedbacks if I want to improve, so that’s why I share with this amazing community my first try in my long journey.
All positive feedback will be very welcome! :slight_smile:

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Hello! The piano and synthesizer interfere with each other. It turned out to be a mess.

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thanks @Romantic_City ! :slight_smile:
maybe removing the piano? or this could be too poor?

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There are many options. You can try alternating between piano and synthesizer. You can introduce new instruments instead of the synthesizer. It’s a matter of taste. I wouldn’t clean the piano. To my taste, the piano sounds more interesting and pleasant than a synthesizer.

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thanks again! good advice @Romantic_City :grinning: :beer:

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Hey! I would suggest trying to add a bit more depth to the track, especially in the low end. A simple sine bass might add a lot to it!

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thanks for the good advice @PeterCleaverMusic I will take it into account!! :slight_smile: :beer:

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Nice work, but I think you should revisit the arrangement a bit and remove some of the instruments. Don’t overload the track with the number of instruments. Good luck)

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hi @MaxiMusix! thanks a lot for the advice!! yes, I agree, ,… I have to revisit and choose accurately the instruments… thanks again :slight_smile: :beer: