The biggest issue to me is the beat at 1:34. You have a very laid back, asian new-age style thing going on, and the sudden energy is really disorienting and a complete change in style. All the energetic synth work that comes in after that is also a big no-no to me.
Besides that, the production could use some work - I’m not sure if it’s good enough to pass or not. You have hi-hats panning left and right which is a bit distracting, and have a bit too much high end for my taste (might cut through the mix of a video too much). The synth pads could use a bit more internal movement and richness to their sound, I think.
The really tricky thing that bothers me though, is the rhythm across the whole track. The string phrases don’t seem to be quite in time to the beat. Considering the “ethic” style and what not, not sure if they’ll be OK with that or not.