Hi everyone, I’m new doing this, and my first song was rejected. I think that the song have good quality of sound, but maybe I’m wrong, or maybe is the style… I don,t know, but I want to learn and improve myself, so any help or review is welcome, thank you very much!!
Hello!
- I would do more development (arrangement half empty), too monotonous until 1:00. After 1:00 I would have made the culmination instead of the “pit”.
- The track is too long.
- Work with mixing.
My thoughts. 
Good luck!
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Yes, I think that its too long also, I did it like this to give more options, more variations but maybe its not a good idea, haha! thanks for you review!