Do you have advice?

Do you have advice? I would like to submit this draft for approval.

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I like it. You could add some titles to the displays and make the transition movements smoother.

Thank you
you are right

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I think you’re on some good stuff! I like the interesting visuals that are going on around the photos, but I feel like the screen around the countdown could be a bit more interesting, it feels a little empty because the rest of the video is so rich of visuals.
And may be add a slight horizontal-movement in the camera when it’s showing the photos, I feel like the stops are a little too abrupt with the movement.

Good luck!

Feedback is important
I’m in the process of editing. Thank you guys.
I hope I can help someday

How about this?