Am I going well?

I’m looking for someone to inform me
Hi @eppton your item needs alot of work … it won’t be approved . Sorry for saying it but it’s the truth… but this is not the end of the road … i was just like you once … just work on your self and read more about web design (Typography - visual heirachy - choosing color…) you can find all this in tutsplus website . just read and practice … you will be accepted one day
Very good answer really.
Thank you so much.