Dear colleagues, please give us some advice on the rejected track

I look forward to your help and advice

This track is lack of depth. The mix is flat and has some problems. Cymbals sound way too loud and distracting from the beginning till the end. Sorry man but this is far from epic at all. If you’re going into this category, you still have a lot to work.

спасибо большое вам за ответ) я обязательно это исправлю и добавлю глубины!