Could You please provide some feedback on rejected track?

Greetings! I am neewbie here.So This one track I`ve made and it has been rejected by standarts of composition and arrangment,could You please said what You think about it. Thanks!

Hey There,

The timing is very off in the first section. The guitars seem to be locked in ok with the drums, but that glitchy synth thing is way off from everything else and not in a good way… makes it very sloppy and would draw way too much attention under video.

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Thanks for feedback! Yeah seems like I am too harsh with glitch effects, just thought it would be cool :slight_smile: