Corporate track need some comment

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#1

Hi guys, this track get rejected. can somebody point out how it get rejected? need more improvement …much appreciated ,thank u


#2

First I can’t hear significant flaws in this track, it seems mixed and mastered right, apart from the strings starting at 1:50 which seem a bit thin and fake. The main arpeggio (sample guitar?) is a bit too dry and the same through the entire track, it could have been more evolving (cutoff, volume and other), or even being switched to different timbres (real guitar or other different keys / synths) The ending is a bit abrupt too


#3

Thanks @davedondee


#4

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