Constructive Criticism Wanted

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I’m looking to get some editing feedback from a piece I recently created for one of our corporate clients. More specifically, the editing and shot order (continuity), as well as graphics.

Feel free to give it to me strait; I can take it. Just looking to become a better editor. Thanks so much!

The link below will take you to the video on Vimeo

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