Comments on my orchestral track before I submit?

I’m trying something new with this. How do you all structure your orchestral/cinematic tracks? Any suggestions on this before I submit?

Hello! Very nice piano, but a little bit sharp and not smooth. Bass awful(he is very buzzing) !!! Synthesizers are very midi (sound very not natural, and midi) - It’s “hard reject”! Good luck!

Thanks very much for your feedback!