Comedy rejection.... What is your opinion?

Hi,
I got a rejection. What do you think? Can you help me?

Thank you in advance!

You should get a better sounding instrument.

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Thanks! Do you mean the bassoon?

Yeah, I can recommend Lumina

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Thank you very much!

Hello, I find the drums weird. I think they don’t fit in the track. Try another pattern or just find your way with percussion only. (just my opinion) I hope it helps

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Thank you very much!

what do you mean by that?

Strange, but I like it. I can even imagine how this can be applied. Any comedic situation in an interactive TV show with awkward characters could be framed by this composition.

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trying just percussion instead of standard drums. Just an idea.

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Actually the standart drums is a first (well… second) try. I am still learning and experimenting. Most of the time I use percussion only. I think I’ll try a bit more with standart percussion then :wink:
Thank you very much for your opinion!

Hello,

In my opinion:
1.Main theme is too complicatetd mayby try tell the same but simple.
2.This is specific style of music and sometimes “bad quailty of sound” is ok.

Good Luck!

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Hello,
Thank you very much for your feedback!
The theme uses one motive quite often, how would it be more simple?

Do you mean my track has bad quality? How would I improve?

Hello,:grinning:

The theme uses one motive quite often, how would it be more simple?
More simple melody line I mean "answer and question " not too much grace notes etc.

Do you mean my track has bad quality? How would I improve?
I mean sometimes example :high quality piano sound is not good for music from 80s.