Hi guys,
this christmas flyer received an hard rejection, any advices please?:
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i personally like the style of what u have done here , though , lets face it, at this stage the typo part - which is essential here - is not good enough, try to introduce originality and make sure that your font combinations are unique and harmonious. U also have to make sure that the central texts are outstanding , it will thus reinforce the hierarchy of information, underlining it … in this case this is not bad but not yet satisfying enough
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You’re always so kind and helpful! And your works are greats! I’ll do my best in improving this 
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i try to help buddy , i think this is important either to be true and tell the truth but also not to focus only onthings that can be improved, which can turn demotivating too … designers need a bit confidence to create more quietly and serenly 
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Respect
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