Hello please have a look on my latest 2 hard reject to my flyers and please tell me whats wrong
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hi I think that first of all there are some models from some image stock banks that are not welcome here anymore , this maybe an issue for the us football flyer … especially for the two guys in the front line …I like this flyer though and hard to tell what is so much of a mistake so that the item did not make it, I see some details though ,like the footer, I was always told that a good footer is one that could be included in an ellipse, in other words , short for the first part the middle more extended horizontally speaking and afterwards, for the last line, shorter again … from the flyer right now is slightly raw I would have added some finition to it by dropping some shadows in different places, especially behind the two front guys, , smooth on the text … one also own the ground to have sort of a reflection of the text on the ground, too. Otherwise, I think that u should either decrease the boldness of the footer text or make it no black but really dark grey like 0/0/0/90 so that the text is smoother , more readable and more outstanding , too. also vs is what is springing out the most … so that the hierarchy looks a bit strange with such colors right now. If I were u, I would also increase the interlettering in the footer as this is clearly not breathing at the moment , hence the issue of readability of the footer, also …
rener hoiuse club
if ask me there are several things to fix or improve though the flyer looks globally decent … for me the dodging all around the model is really looking too superficial and I would recommend that u blur it more so this is smoother and more transitioning also. By the way , to be honest with u, indeed, this is hard to figure out what this dodging is coming from and this makes rather little sense , in my opinion to have it here in this “lighting context”. Otherwise , most of your text are really far from springing out a lot to say the least , especially when it comes to the header and a bit more again as far as thinner font parts is concerned. Globally for me the flyer is a bit too simple in terms of style. If u want to know how I feel this is reducing the commercial interest for some people and this may generate disappointment in case the flyer makes it , is being sold and that the buyer considers what he has left in the main file ,once the model is gone …