Can you please give suggestions on this template?

I have created html template for uploading in themeforest. The link for the template is kindly have a look at it and give suggestions if any improvement needed

Looks like you have some interesting features etc but the execution is a long was off esp typography, spacing and the design need modernising is bring those features to life more

Thank you so much for the suggestion. Will work on it.

Have made changes and updated.

Could you please verify once?

Bad colors and spacing problems