Can you give me some advice for my design doesn't me quality standard?


Can you give me some advice for my design doesn’t me quality standard?

Thanks

I like the graphic element but your big issues are typography, text spacing and alignments.Also your fake logo doesn’t have any impact.

thanks for feedback, I Try another design

Also make US Letter size, this can increase sales. (8.5x11 in -> 8.75x11.25 in with bleeds). US Letter is popular size and it’s not difficul to transform from A4. ;] GL