Although I don’t have any similar templates on my profile but here is what I think :
- At the starting logo reveal the circle design (maybe a shape layer with trim paths ) is looking a bit odd .
- The animation doesn’t feels smooth while travelling from one scene to another , you can make the keyframes easy ease and play with the speed graph .
- The show time of some scenes is less , in few scenes I wasn’t able to read the text as it used to vanish quickly.
- The dishes name (like steam dumpling) doesn’t seem as good because of some effects applied to it is cutting the text .
- The last scene seems to be more in the left hand side rather than in the middle.
The design is very beautiful indeed I like all the illustrations and they are eye catchy you can also try to sell them at graphicriver.