Can anyone tell me the reason behind this flyer rejection?

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#1

Hi there, I am so upset with my recent hard rejections and can't find any valid reason behind the rejections. Can anyone please show me the way? Links: https://www.dropbox.com/s/mz2proz6we1bhgp/Corporate%20Flyer.jpg?dl=0 https://www.dropbox.com/s/vnxn34rybopa5gt/Modern%20Real%20Estate%20Flyer.jpg?dl=0


#2

They’re not too bad, but the layouts don’t look great. The real estate one, it’s a bit of a messy layout - I’m talking about the text here, the hardest part to get right. Plus there’s just no “wow factor” to the flyers, they’re quite boring and generic. The text boxes overlayed on top of the images of the houses, that’s a bad idea.


#3

thank you, I’ll try my best to correct these mistakes