Can anyone help, why is my logo always rejected, help and guide

Hi Friends,

hi i see a collection of things to fix or improve indeed

1- typo
this is really super flat like this … there are no variations, no font combinations, no color playing and basically really no originality whatsoever … but the problem is that here typo is a major issue no matter what is the category …

2- global harmony
at this stage u have a disconnection between the illustration and the texts that is pretty emphasized by the choice of colors …

3- global style
i thin that this is style rather common a style that u have here and not really in keeping with what logo trends turn out to be right now, u should have more of a play with shapes and the pathfinder

4- concept
do not get me wrong i do not mean this is not good, though i think that making sure to strengthen the concept somehow some way would be a good idea …

5- tagline
for me right now it looks a little bit too thin and i think that this is relegating the tagline to too much of a subsidiary info indeed …