Business Card. Don't know what the problem is..hlp. I would be very grateful

[RiddgeStone]

Hello! Help me, please. I’m new, this is my second rejected work. Don’t know what the problem is(
Maybe I’m using something forbidden?
Please give some advice.
Thanks

Here are some more works:

[libincreative]

They just do not like them, but that doesn’t means your works are not at high quality.

[RiddgeStone]

Thank you for the answer.